Through The Eyes

In continuation of my previous post:

As promised, here is the poem that I have submitted to the America Library of Poetry Contest!! 🙂

eyes

Through The Eyes

Through the eyes of a dancer,

the movements unfold,

telling you stories that have never been told…

 

Through the eyes of a writer,

you read deep into the soul,

feeling the pages of secrets slowly unroll.

 

Through the eyes of a ballerina,

you experience the truth

about all of the days of work that we spend of our youth

 

Through the eyes of an artist,

the vibrant canvas unwinds

as all of the shapes and colors combine…

 

When you look into the eyes of me,

tell me… What do YOU see?

For, this is all that I am and ever hope to be…

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What do you think???? Do you have any ideas that would have made this even better? I would love to hear your input in the comments section.

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4 thoughts on “Through The Eyes

  1. Oh my goodness Maysaaaaaa! This is an absolute work of ART! 💜💜💜 I love it so much!! I can see why it was chosen! 🙂 you did a great job with it. Sadly I can’t offer any words of advice; I’m not much of a poet, but I do like to appreciate good poetry when I read it, haha! Through The Eyes doesn’t look to need any improvements though. I’d love to see more of your work if you’d ever like to post it! xx

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